My One True Fear

by Marci   Jan 28, 2007


We were the best of friends
Together through all the twists and bends
But as the days went on
We became much more fond

And soon I found myself falling for you
It was going good, no one ever knew
But I couldn't hide it,
The feelings that I knew were true.

I would lie awake at night
Wondering if I should try and fight
Try to take the chance
Maybe ask for just one dance

Did I do something wrong
Or did I just lay there for too long

You left, I knew you would
But I thought maybe that we could...
We could stay together
And live forever

But I guess that was to bold
A lost story never told
You are still near
But you have became my one true fear

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    You ARE still here
    But you have became my one true fear
    ^ i didn't really like those lines. they jsut sounded a bit off to mee.

    wow, i loved this. so powerful and strong, the flow was great except in those last two lines and the emotion was intense. i really loved it, changing the last two lines would only improve it. nicely done! 5/5

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