Comments : My One True Fear

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    You ARE still here
    But you have became my one true fear
    ^ i didn't really like those lines. they jsut sounded a bit off to mee.

    wow, i loved this. so powerful and strong, the flow was great except in those last two lines and the emotion was intense. i really loved it, changing the last two lines would only improve it. nicely done! 5/5