Wow! That was a really great poem. Excellent job!

Amazing poem! can relate to it. Keep up the good work! you have talent. Like that poem a lot!

Wow. i loved this whole piece. i loved the concept of it, the words you use. it was a delight to read this. great work 5/5

I loved the ending! You wrote with such power and determination. Never left someone else have control over your life or else you'll be left broken. Well done *5/5*