This was really well written. I love it.

Wow, I love this poem. It is so strong. You write very well. Keep up the great work.

This flowed well and used great vocabulary. this was almost haunting i really enjoyed reading it, you managed to create lasting images, well done

This poem was excellent! it had so much emotion. it was so perfectly set out.

5 from me. whoo hoo! clap clap

David

Let yourself out!!! I love this poem!! It is awesome!! I have felt your pain

Very good... i like it.. u need to get urself known. Let it out! u need to shout. before u explode!

THIS IS AN AWESOME POEM!! I LOVED IT! IT REALLY SPEAKS TO ME AND I REALLY IDENTIFY WITH IT!

That was really good, i loved how in depth you were with your feelings. I really liked that it would something that you would remember after you read it.