This is really good, you should read my poem called "A Cold 40 You can Chug", It might help you out with what you are going thru. It's about happiness. It has strong symbolism and you have to read in between the lines. Hope you work things out.

Stay Playa,
SC

Ok wow thats not fare at all. He is just a loser for asking her out but she saying yes and knowing it would hurt you well that isn't a good friend at all. You just got to stay strong i know you can so just keep your head held high and if you need someone one to talk to go ahead and comment me and i will give you my e-mail. This is an amazing poem.
5/5 with no hesitation

xx.chelsea.xx

I cant believe that! all these poems u write about him u love him so much and then he goes out with ur bestfriend...not right....i dont know about u but id slap her and punch him and leave...lol well i hope u can c it through u are a loving girl

-Cassie

Hey, how are you doing? haven't been on in a while! But this is a great poem love the last stanza! Great emotion!
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xoxo-am

Every one always says "oh theres better ones out there or oh hes a jerk or blah" but i know that that doesn't help! i luv this and allur stuff!

annika