One of my favorite poems i have read on this site. very creative and beautiful. 5/5 from me. keep up the good work.

"If I was granted
To have one wish come true
I would simply wish
That I could be with you"

This is my favorite part. I've actually said something similar before.

5/5

YEAH THIS IS GREAT! U HAVE MAD SKILLS... KEEP IT UP THIS POEM IS A 100% ALL THE WAY!!

LOVE,
ARIEL

Wonderful job on your poem. Word choices were great! I really enjoyed reading this.

"If I were a rain cloud
The world would not survive
Because as long as I'd have you
There'd be no reason for me to cry"

I actually sighed reading this. Such a beautiful stanza!! It entails personification and it is just adorable.

I love your writing. Keep it up.

By the way, you were right. It wasn't just a rose ;) Some people just don't get it.

Gd