Woah. This was...IS...amazing. I'm speechless. So intense. Great use of words. IDFSDHJFSD. I love this!!! I love you too!!! Excellent, great, beautiful write!! =] Never stop, please? And thanks so much for your comments!! =]]

-` Glenduh.

Wow I have no words to explain how good that is. comment some of my poems if you would like. keep your work up
5/5

xx.chelsea.xx

Omg! this is sooo good. the rhyming is perfect. makes the poem go quick but doesnt take away from the thoughts and feelings. my favorite:

And not a single person cares...
Music blares into our ears
Anything. But no one hears

so goood. great job!!!

Rhyme seems ot be ur strong point, great stuff, i love ur styles :)

I loved this excellent write
Blinding storms of broken souls
The crying souls of sing plight
We are lost drowning in shame
And no one will forget our name

A few of my favorite lines excellent job.

Amazing poem
it flows perfectly.
5/5 your a amazing poet
x

Very good.

D_P

Excellent poem. The emotion was really heartfelt.

You know I really like reading your poems. *sighs*