Very well written. The feeling and emotion really puts the finishing touches of the poem.

I agree. Nicely written. I can feel you wanting to help. I hope things turn out okay.

Shirlz
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Very good poem and very sad and emotional your friend is very lucky to have a friend like you

Poetry can be very therapeutic.

Wow so heartfelt poem and lovely wrote. I can really figure out what are you talking about in this piece and I can relate it to my personal life even. Superb work 5/5

Tc
Fsams