Awsome poem 5/5

This is jus amazing. I loved reading it. And thanks for ur lovely comment on my poem. 5/5 for you.

Nice i like this one good job!

Beautiful poem. Your feelings of love really shine in this piece. Great job! Take Care Cindy

Oh wonderful! I know the feeling way too well. I know how much it hurts and even if I didn't, I would after reading your poem. Keep up the good work and hang in there!!

Awww this is so so sweet. I like your poems. You are a good writer. Keep it up.
Crystal 5/5

Did you ever stop to see
That each time we were together
I would melt within your eyes
A feeling I'll always treasure

so powerful, that right there felt like you were talking right to the reader, amazing stuff. :)

Melissa

Hey hun another great poem. u express urself so good. very well written once again. love reading ur work!! xx

Great poem . Thanks for your comment!

I love your choice of words,it flowed well and kept me wanting more.well done x

I LOVED this!
I found it to be very intense and the imagery and wording were wonderful.
I loved the rhyme scheme and I thought the whole piece flowed very well.

Omg..i love it!!!!!!! it is so sweet and so true! i can totally relate..except he finally asked me out. 5/5

xoxo kisses