Comments : Crying In The Rain

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    Wow. that is all i can say... wow. i LOVED it!!! it was awesomeness in excelsis!!! haha... i got to use a big latin word... anyway! ive done this before, during my schools musical rehearsal i stood outside in the SNOW for half an hour being all depressed and crying. i blamed my uber red face on the cold. but yeah, awesome poem!

    5/5
    ~Allanah~

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is really good, this poem really deserve to be the contest winner as it is really great. keep up the great work. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Great poem, I would just have to say to take caution with straining rhyming for your poetry (at least in this poem) but other than that, the feeling is very realistic and you did an excellent job!

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    This poem was excellent, the flow and rhythmn was superb and I absolutely loved the ending... Well done on getting 2nd place for my first ever contest, and thanks for entering it... A very enjoyable read 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by MyDevotion

    This poem definately had an excellent flow about it! I love how you kept it neat and in line! and keeping up with the title made it a nice read 5/5 =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Connie

    I really enjoyed reading this poem!

    Clouds part letting the sunshine in
    Realization has come from within
    A sign sent down from up above
    To give another chance to love

    Wow!

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Amazing. Simply amazing. I got goose bumps from reading this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I liked this poem.. I'm glad I'm not the only one who feels better after I'm outside in the rain I thought I was just crazy for a while

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww. Even though this was written for a contest, I still think that it was very well written. It was as if you were feeling the pain yourself. Whether or not you were, it was very good. I enjoyed the plot and the rhyme and the flow. Everything! Lol.

    [A sign sent down from up above
    To give another chance to love]
    ^^Suggestion: Change around a few words around in the second line. The flow doesn't seem to be here in these two lines. To me, anyways.

    That's all I could really find wrong with it. Otherwise, I thought it had great emotion and depth to it. Very well written. =) 5/5 xxoo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by littlemissxsunshine

    Wow i love this! im glad im not the only one who feels this way (: