by Poetess Lana
Wow. that is all i can say... wow. i LOVED it!!! it was awesomeness in excelsis!!! haha... i got to use a big latin word... anyway! ive done this before, during my schools musical rehearsal i stood outside in the SNOW for half an hour being all depressed and crying. i blamed my uber red face on the cold. but yeah, awesome poem! |
by Goran Rahim
This is really good, this poem really deserve to be the contest winner as it is really great. keep up the great work. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it. |
Great poem, I would just have to say to take caution with straining rhyming for your poetry (at least in this poem) but other than that, the feeling is very realistic and you did an excellent job! |
by donna
This poem was excellent, the flow and rhythmn was superb and I absolutely loved the ending... Well done on getting 2nd place for my first ever contest, and thanks for entering it... A very enjoyable read 5/5 xx |
by MyDevotion
This poem definately had an excellent flow about it! I love how you kept it neat and in line! and keeping up with the title made it a nice read 5/5 =) |
by Connie
I really enjoyed reading this poem! |
by Katie
Amazing. Simply amazing. I got goose bumps from reading this. |
I liked this poem.. I'm glad I'm not the only one who feels better after I'm outside in the rain I thought I was just crazy for a while |
Aww. Even though this was written for a contest, I still think that it was very well written. It was as if you were feeling the pain yourself. Whether or not you were, it was very good. I enjoyed the plot and the rhyme and the flow. Everything! Lol. |
Wow i love this! im glad im not the only one who feels this way (: |