Comments : Happy is a lie

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Great and sad. I know, it's so dumb that my friend would date my ex. Ugh, all I could do was cry. :( Thanks for everything though :)
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Mandz and Aly

    I really like this poem. im kinda having writers block at the moment. nothing to write about. but yeah good job. my email is messed up now. but ill try to talk to you lata. bye
    aly

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    We are all guilty of this read my i wear a mask part of it is for you
    cy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "the mascara keeps running"

    i always love metaphors about the mascara and tears and this one never gets old.
    Excellent sad poem, very emotive!
    Take care
    5/5
    *Gem&*