I Cried Today..

by kate   Jan 29, 2007


I cried today,
For the first time in ages
Im still letting it go
As I write on these pages

But after a day,
Or even a week
Its gunna start to seem
Like my eyes have sprung a leak

Coz I know now Ive started
I might not ever stop
Coz Im now at the bottom
Ive plummeted from the top

Its a long way to fall
In such a short time
But youll never know
Ill act perfectly fine

Ill hide my weakness
And Ill hide my pain
Coz Ive got no one
And nothing to gain

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  • 17 years ago

    by Natasha

    It's a very good poem, I liked the way you rhymed very much. Little tip though is to use correct english, it's a better read all around I tend to expierence. :) for the rest I think this one deserves a 5/5!

    all the best,
    Natasha

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    Great poem. The rhythm was smooth and the words worked together to create a feeling for the reader.