by Jessyie♥♥♣♣ Jan 29, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
This is your typical story |
by Dan
Hmm.. what to say? well its a good start i would say but it doesnt have that wow! factor. love is a very strong subject and many people could write poems that probably could make some people cry. you showed that your starting to write well but you need to write it with more feeling. |
I can't help feeling that you just sat, wrote this out, and then posted it... |