Dreamscape

by Anthony   Jan 29, 2007


Last night I dreamt a fantasy
You were on my team
And you were wherever I was
Or so it seemed.

I stood there by your side
You didn't even look at me
"The walls are painted with the scythe" you said
"But why i cannot see."

We stood in a room
More empty than a hollow planet
"You're right" I said
"I can even smell it."

The room was pitch black
We couldn't see a thing
Yet you knew where we were going
"How?" I kept asking.

Endless both ways
It was colder than ice
And i was the only one warm
I realized.

I asked why you were so cold
And you stopped me dead in the hall
I saw your eyes and then I knew
It was you who painted these walls.

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  • 15 years ago

    by BornAgainWriter

    I love the imagery.
    Its what kept it going. It got more and more intense.

    another favorite.

  • 16 years ago

    by fallenforever

    I loved the last stanza, but the whole poem kinda spooked me. its very well writen and full of feeling 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    By god I loved it. I was a little spooked but hey, that shows how good of a poem it was! o.o
    Seriously. It was awesome.
    5/5 Deffinately.

    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Flow...was a tad forced because of the rhyming. It didn't seem like the rhymes were working well. But the imagery made up for it. I do like the last stanza. Of course the imagery of the rest of this piece was great and worked well to come to that point.
    ~Faith-less

  • 16 years ago

    by Muffin

    I reallu like this poem 2 your really good with the love things

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