Really good

I give you a five because of your description of everything. I always love a good ending. I think that it is one of the better poems I have read on this site in a while.

Very good.

Look forward to more from you.

I'll watch for more from you in the poetry club we're in.

Ahh sam bery bery nice haha excuse the "bery" lol very sorry for that but yeash 5/5 and im not just saying this coz im your friend