That was real sweet but man, if you're feeling this way already at age 14 he must be some guy!!

I liked it, but yeah 14 and love, be easy baby. On the real though, your writing is good, but it it could be better, but at 14 you have plenty of time to mature, and you don't have that far to go. Keep writing.

great poem. you have real talent.

Best of wishes, good luck, and much more,
Ashley