Woah! this is like really about you! i loveeee this poem! but uhm ...dont you have green eyes? lmao=]

This is a great poem. great feeling and thought behind it. i made that same decision too and its working out pretty well for me. lol.

just some suggestions: make break it into stanzas. itll make it an easier read because it changes in rhythm a couple times. also some lines are awkward.

overall nice job

II agree with Poonam about the stanza thing but it's still good.
I think a lot of people would be able to relate to this
5/5
*Gem*

I have done the same thing. but i just forced myself to stop, and i did.

good on. this is a great poem. i can relate to it so so much!

5/5 david

I would also agree with the stanza idea, apart from that very well written and I have felt the same way myself

I loved this poem it was wonderful i can relate to it my life has been horrible but no ones is perfect, keep writing ur good 5/5

Wow this was excellent such a great read uve got talent

I think I agree with alot of the people who commented already, this would be better read if it was broken into stanzas. I think it's still a great piece though. 5/5

marcella

Wow. Kay I know you wrote this about you but... blue eyes, curly red hair(even though I always sraighten it)- living a lie... that's me!! LOL.
I really like this poem
Of the poems of your's I've read, this is my favourite.

Wow, this is a really good poem. I can relate to it a lot.

I like a lot this poem cause I know what you felt when you wrote it.You have done a great job.Don't stop writing cause you're an amazing poet.Take care of you,best regards,Michelle ( that's my name,too)
<3 XxX <3 XxX

This should be inspiration beceuse we all do this sometimes Great work 5/5

Great poem!.. dont live anyone else's life but you own =) .. very nice job... i love your style of writing .. keep it up! flow is great.. word choice is great.. but you already know that because so many people seem to love your poems.. keep writing!

"She doesnt even try,"
-Doesn't needs an apostrophe. :]

Hmm, first of all a really nice poem. I love how you first explain the physical features of this girl, her hair, her eyes, her frown, ect. ect. It was excellent. Then, you go on and explain how all you do is cry, you aren't overally happy with yourself and all you wish is that you could be someone else. I saw some true feelings come out and I could tell that you weren't happy with yourself for some various reasons [ like for example you say that you don't want to feel what you've felt, and that you could escape those terrible feelings.. or lets just assume they are terrible, right? :]]] okay, but anyway.. I am basically just restating what your poem was about. lmao. Don't worry about being perfect, hun.. we aren't at all perfect. We all wish we were someone else, because we aren't always happy with who we are, or what we've dealt with in our lifetimes.. We want to escape those things, but we never ever will be able to in our lifetimes.. regardless of how hard we try. Who knows if I'm even making sense here. Haha. Anyways... I absolutely love the last two lines.. they are powerful and wow'd me. It was amazing.. it just summed everything up, and kind of gave me the hope that you only deal with your own life, and not others. Which is good! :] Using the title at the end was perfect. Very fitting to the poem. Overall, excellent. 5/5.