Comments : I try

  • 17 years ago

    by lorna westwick

    Wow this poem is amazing
    the ending is my favourite part
    well done and look forward to reading more like this 1
    xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    This is a very good piece.
    Hard, but necessary to let go on the one you love to move on..
    The end is great
    Loved reading it.
    Take care