Nothing

by firexdancer   Jan 29, 2007


The stars are black,
The sky is white,
I cannot see,
There is no light.

All life is gone,
Everything's red,
There's nothing left,
Except the dead.

The bodies move,
Like broken toys,
The screams have stopped,
There are no joys.

I lie here now,
As the flames thrive,
But I cannot feel,
I'm not alive.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like rhyming in third stanza because it seems forced, but I like everything else about this one. It has great imagery and you described emotions on fantastic way. I truly love how you wrote this one, it is somehow simple but very deep and filed with so many feelings. Well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. It was kind of deep. The flow was very nice and the word choice was great. I gave this poem a 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    I LOVED this poem, its flow was fantastic! and i loved the second stanza, you really painted a picture for me in this one, another great piece!

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well this poem was something special, this poem had i think a special inner meaning, that i caught a glimmer of for a second. but it was magic. well done!

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    I love all of you who are posting here!
    thank you so much!
    it helps me live!
    luv gabriella

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