Wow.. wow.. wow.. all i can say is WOW that was awesome!

I love all of you who are posting here!
thank you so much!
it helps me live!
luv gabriella

Well this poem was something special, this poem had i think a special inner meaning, that i caught a glimmer of for a second. but it was magic. well done!

5/5 David

I LOVED this poem, its flow was fantastic! and i loved the second stanza, you really painted a picture for me in this one, another great piece!

I liked it. It was kind of deep. The flow was very nice and the word choice was great. I gave this poem a 5/5.

I don't like rhyming in third stanza because it seems forced, but I like everything else about this one. It has great imagery and you described emotions on fantastic way. I truly love how you wrote this one, it is somehow simple but very deep and filed with so many feelings. Well done!