I wish i was a star

Kyri can definitely relate to this one ^^ (Kyri wishes wings to fly though xP). It was sweet and majestic, simple but powerful.

Aww well penned! flow was okay for me. I love the title of the poem! Uhm to improve this I would suggest you to use punctuations because a poem without a punctuation is like a song without a tune. :) but overall it was great.

Hmm...I thought this one could've been better. I didn't like the flow much. It seemed really rocky. Not so much at the beginning, but near the end it started to get worse. Just watch the flow throughout the whole poem. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

Ohhh that was so good! short but i loved it!!!!! 5/5 xD

Oooohh wow, so beautiful! thats fantastic, i love how your mind works, these poems look like you didnt need the effort and that is a good thing!

xoxo Lucy