by Tom Swart
Nice, I think I could sense your words and their meaning. Keep up the prose and remember to be one with your poem. If it is real youll be able to feel it breath and its heart to beat. A poem is a fragment of time, a sliver of emotion trapped in our hearts and set free upon the page. Where it can finally sore and fly with other poems or cry and weep with other broken hearts. Poetry is nothing more than emotion set in motion. Poetry is seldom more than the small fossil that waits within the stone begging for someone to chip it free, and then to wonder how it came to be. |
by Carly
Hey mike, |
Nice and sweet. |
by weelindz
Awwwww!! |
Wow perfect rhyme, amazing flow..i love ur work keep it up |
by Kaila
Aww this is so cute! I love it! I wish the guys I knew, knew how to right poetry like you haha but it was good 5/5 for sure |
by Kaila
Aww this is so cute! I love it! I wish the guys I knew, knew how to right poetry like you haha but it was good 5/5 for sure |
by john whalley
Wow brill 5/5 for shure :) |