MY TRIP IN PARADISE

by kat   Jan 29, 2007


As the sunset collapsed in the horizon, i walk alone barefoot in the sandy shore in a beach called Paradise. As i was walking, i felt that the breeze is walking with me too coniving with the waves of water splashing along my way. The cold air made me shiver as i continue my journey to nowhere. Suddenly, i noticed that the sky is changing from vibrant gold to crimson red. Tears begin to cloud my eyes as i stare in awe at a very heavenly sight. I quickly brushed my tears away but i still can hear myself sobbing. I've never felt so light and free in my entire life....Then, my tears were blown by the heavy wind and i got full control of myself again. I decided to sit for a moment in a big rock near the beach. The scenery and the long stretch of dancing water is breath taking, it relaxed my mind. I closed my eyes for i don't know how long and prayed that that day will never end....but it did!

I woke up and i am no longer in Paradise. I promised myself that i'll go back there if i can. I know in my heart that i'll see that place again...after all it's not that far...It's just a dream away.

**Pls. spare a second to vote or comment. It will really mean a lot to me. This is more of a story that a poem, but i added it to my list anyway. ;)

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