Fake

by firexdancer   Jan 29, 2007


I hear them whisper,
they think i'm too young too think this way
but they don't understand how i feel
nobody understands how i feel
my friends ask me if i'm tired
"yes" i lie
because i can't tell them how i really feel inside,
because i know they wouldn't get it
start walking away,
they'd get too scared of me
and find someone else who will play
cause they only like me, because they think i'm fun
a girl who laughs all the time,
is smiling and dumb
they don't know what is inside, of this black heart of mine
and if i told them,
they would draw a line.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I like the topic and you described emotions excellently, I know how you fell with fake friends around your self. You have few mistakes in this one, you used words:-I-understand-feel-because-inside-too- two or more times and that destroys flow. Anyway great poem with really good and original topic!

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    Wow! Thats really good! My favourite lines where ""yes" i lie
    because i can't tell them how i really feel inside,"
    And I also liked "cause they only like me, because they think i'm fun
    a girl who laughs all the time,
    is smiling and dumb
    they don't know what is inside, of this black heart of mine
    and if i told them,
    they would draw a line"
    I can really relate to it! Well done!

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