Like a rose (2nd rose poem)

by Finalgravedigger   Jan 29, 2007


Love is like a rose

Love is a great compassion built between two people.As the rose grows it's beauty does too.But as the rose grows more beautiful the thorns grow bigger and sharper. As you fall in love more and more the rose grows higher and more pretty and with more thorns.But if you fall from the top of the rose too the bottom, it's so much harder to climb to the top. All the thorns cut you and bring down more. It's almost impossible to climb back up.And its best sometimes to make another one.

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  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    That was real deep and touching. And sometimes it is good to just plant another one :) Great metaphor!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Delicious 42

    Hey that was deep. I like it how you describe the rose in all those ways.

    Bethany

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley

    I like it i like it.. thats awesome i can relate to this ... i like your work

    Ashley
    p.s Rock on and thx 4 commenting

  • 17 years ago

    by elmahdy

    So bretty and thanks for ur encouragement

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadesOfNessa

    Thx for commenting on my poem...ive wrotes hundreds i just havent posted them yet!...yours make sense i really like them...