Yeah I call this feeling a dilema. Very nice poem I trully liked it 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

This was great, it truely was, so siple yet so deep, i know the feelings that the poem puts back into me and i am glad i have found a way to rid them, hopefully you will too.

This is written greatly with a nice style. i like the originality of this poem, great job.

Hey buddy...it been long time i did not hear you...perhaps you did not remember me...

ken, this was beautiful sad penned you potray here, simply but well expression emotions...hopefully everything well with you, take care.

bert.

Really wierd one dude:P but still quite fun to read;-)

-Haggi

I can’t say I got the meaning of this poem very well. but while reading it, it sounded like a good poem to me. I’d like to know the meaning behind its words.

Grreat job. i like the title but uhm there is one thing wrong. its gramatically incorrect to say moving in mono. because mono means 'as one' there for it doesnt fit. but im sure you could fix that.

"its gramatically incorrect to say moving in mono"? lol

I just have to ask you a question - ever heard of something called a metaphor?

I love the first line to this poem

I'm colorless to white

Idk what it is about it, but I just love it, splendid job my dear!! Keep up the awesome work 5/5!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

Even though I didn't really understand this, I feel it had very vivid words that brought the feel of the poem out. Good work on the description ;)

Lmfao well done my love.
missed your poetry lately.

and your comment towards mono.. that made me laugh i love you

I'm colorless to white

That line.. Gave me chills.
Brilliant, mate. Even if "moving in mono" is a bit of an odd term. You did a good job though.. with the analogy.

5/5