Wow, this was great. I can relate to this poem. It's so hard.
5/5

Ah wow. You've said so much in such little words, but they are just right. I can relate to this sooo much. Excellent write. 5/5

Tammie xo

Ahh, I see you've used those lines from my Shining Star poem. :]

You did an excellent job writing this. The punctuation could be fixed up a little, but overall 5/5. I felt the emotion and passion from this piece. :]