The imagery in this piece was fantastic, i thought the flow could use a little work but to be honest, the poem was written well and made that kinda un-noticable to me still gets a 5/5 from me

Amazing use of language here, the abundance of harmonic words really made this a vivid imagery piece.
In terms of critisism, the main point would be flow. It's all great using these creative words but they sometimes hinder the poems flow a little. If you were to go over it, think about some descriptions that aren't completely needed, and what would make it sound less "wordy," that should help a bit.
Lovely poem anyway, thanks for sharing.

That was wonderful!! It didn't flow in the middle very well I think because the stanza seemed to be broken. But over all wonderful!! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy