Its a good , sweet poem it made sense and it rhymed .hope the people see that you guys were meant to be together .loved the poem

Good one i like the words and the rhym i jsut hope you split it into paragraph easier for the eye to read then 1 big paragraph

That was a very good poem i really like it i can relate it to my relationship it was very good

That was a very good poem i really like it i can relate it to my relationship it was very good