Ah, I'm going to pick, as most criticizers do.
"Something more than scraps and bruises"
--'scraps' _should be 'scrapes'.

"Something that everyone must fell"
--'fell' _should be 'feel'.

And there are other miniscule errors that are not really important.
But yes, I fully agree with your poem and I love you very much, dear.

You are awesome.
--SJG.