I like this poem, I understand what you are saying..... but seriously, you only need one capital letter starting at the beginning of every sentence unless more for other reasons. I don't understand though.... because it was making out that you liked that person then it changed... mayb if u worked on the feeling the one feeling that you want people to view this friend
well anyway good work

And thanks for my comment, I know I understand but seriously (like ive been telling everyone in this realtionship) HE'S A ........! JERK!!!!!! forget about it! tell him to GET ........! i'm sorry, but i've been heart broken and it's just so simple to me now.. but try and do it, i bet you will feel heaps better then.
STUPID JERK how dare he.. u sound so wonderful!