Its okay, it dosn't flow all that well and seems kinda forced, but it has alot of potential, and it has decent imagry

This is a well written poem about life in suspension and closure
and you know thing will change
well done

I really liked this. It doesn't have the best flow, but overall it was a great read. 5/5

marcella

I'll start off with the good things. i really loved the idea of this poem and the first and second lines were amazing.

and now for the bad... uhm you have a lot of mistakes... like every thing... its one word. you put quilty instead or guilty if you just take sometime to re-read your poem and edit those ilittle details the it would be sooooo much better.

-liz

I love this style of poetry! you did it really well. keep it up hun.
Much love and many kisses,
Bex

Amazing write! but have a lot of mistakes like every thing its one word. You put quilty instead of guilty if you just take sometime to re-read your poem and edit those little details the it would be so much better, but all together a great write and keep it up, you have what it takes!!
nessa

Bri.. You are amazing writer.. and I hope you never forget that. .I think you probably already heard that tons of times.. but your choices of words, just simply flows. it so deep and yet soo touching.. I want you to keep up the good work.. good job 5/5 (i aint one of the downvoters! read it from ur profile lol)