Wow really good, scary!

I liked this poem... it was well written.... were you writing about having writer's block??? well it was good n e ways..
A.

I seriously love this poem my fav bit was when my pen does work, it doodles in margins
drawing disproportioned faces glaring up at me
faces of people, I don't know, but would like to
they seem to hold the key to my thoughts.
--but they won't talk

that was amazing it creates such a bold image of this person, it plays n creativity and i really like it 10/5 if i could lol

xxx alex xxx

This is a very good poem. love how you give the pen a mind of its own. allowing it to draw instead of the person holding the pen it is a great way to personify it.
=)