Holy shit, I just cried that is absolutely amazing, I'm touched

Cindy this is so beautiful....brings back many memories of you and John as young lovers.

"I'd watch you picking daisies
Weaving them into a crown
Placing them on my head
Laughing, we'd fall to the ground"

^My favorite verse

Very vivid imagery , sweet ,romantic , and heartbreaking all in one!!!

Helpless is what i feel after reading this one. Its so romantic & so touchy...i could feel the pain in the end...could imagine all the emotions ur words potray...u r an ultimate poet indeed.

all the best and take care

Thats beautiful, it started of as a cute and sweet poem and developed into a mature passionate poem written by a lady. xox

Absolutely beautiful. My favorite of yours yet! The last stanza (my fav) dealt the last heartbreaking punch. Sad, sweet & memorable with good rhythm and rhyme!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! EXCELLENT JOB!

"Dreams they always have to end
And ours it did not last
You were taken away from me
Leaving me to live in our past"

How true this is. I'm living this now and I hate it.
Great poem.

Wonderfully done! Great flow and feel.

It never fails, everyone of your poems are very good, ive never read a bad poem by you, i give this one a 5/5!!! keep writing!!!

"We were kids who were in love
Everyone said we should wait
Our love was way too strong
We decided to leave it to fate"

Oh, how many times i've heard the words, You're young, you should waiting and enjoying life.
I loved this poem, especially the ending. True love always lasts and i know you'll meet again.
5/5
*Gem*

Beautiful poem..... keep it up! that deserved all 5

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)

Oh my gosh! Hun, that was simply amazing. How I have missed your poetry these last few weeks.
Everything was perfect, don't change a thing.

"We were kids who were in love
Everyone said we should wait
Our love was way too strong
We decided to leave it to fate"

^ Hmph. So many times I have heard I'm too young & it really gets on my last nerve. Because I believe love can capture your heart at any age.

Again, I will say: Wonderful job hun! Keep it up! =] 5/5

Stephanie

Oh mygosh.. this soo sad.. and such an unexpected ending.. i really like it great joB!

Well! Cindy......that is sooooooo
beautiful!! Your best yet.....
Perfection in words of love....

off the scale.....the image it conjures up in the mind is perfect.....

100

Hey cindy,
its a really sweet and loving poem, so beautiful and passionate. well done
your friend, Taz

Pretty depp. Good job.

D_P

Oh lord
that's an amazing poem

This poem left me speechless.....honestly it was amazing! Great job... I would love to read more by you. Great job keep writing!

Truely a great poeming. Very powerful
keep writing.

WiLd RoSe

please comment on mine.

I love the stories about you and dad. I am part of your love story!