Great work Jason...I feel somewhat the same...although the only difference is that my sister is still living with me. I really can feel the emotion in this one. You did a really great job on it. Keep it up.

Alesia.

Wow that was sad but a awsome poem .i could never write anything that good! i give u a five

Whoa bro! *is unspoken*.....very.......very emotional....and the rhyming was also great! ur talent is w/o measure! 10/10 bro!

I have a sister who is 13 years older than I, and I find it really anoying but I still love her I guess

Excellent poem.. it seems u have a lot of feelings for ur sis my friend... well organised some speeling mistakes but very good

That is deep

WOW! this is really good, and deep. keep up the good work. : )

Great poem. You expressed your feelings well. Good job. 5/5

.Sarah.

Exelent work bud. great form

Aww sweety this is sad but its really good!! i can feel ur pain in it

-ariel

This is good because it comes from the hearrrrt. Keep up the good work, i can tell alot of thought went into this. i have a sis too and she's amazing. even thougth she's only 12.

Its a realy touching poem,even though i dont have a sister,but its still a really terrific poem. keep it up,ur really good
luv ya
:kiss:

Aw babs i almost started cryin reading this it's good but so sad

Aww, this was sad :(
hope you're doing fine,
Marjan

Oh..wow Jason this is...amazing. idk what to say...i suck at commetns and usually i say nice job blah blah blah but this is..really really strong and it actually made me tear up..but really this was a GREAT poem. keep it up hun.