BrEaK-uP

by SECRET   Jan 30, 2007


Oh boy, you hurted me
i didn\'t wanted to say this so
but you make me want to say it
and it\\\'s hurting my seoul

I thought i\'ve found someone
who i could be happy with
but now i see
of what a fool i\'ve been

i kick all your \"i love yous\"
for they don\'t mean nothing
i kick all your \"i miss yous\"
for you don\'t even mean anything

i thought you\'d love me truely
but you are being unfaithful
and it\'s killing me inside
to know your not even being truthful

i can see that you\'r hidding something
and i don\'t want to know
i\'v had enough of your game
i\'m letting you go

fly like the wind
for i know you won\'t be comming back
thank your for your \"fake love\"
i\'ll be treasuring that!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    First off, you need to fix the spelling errors.
    It lessens the intensity of the poem and also throws the reader of at times.
    I thought the flow seemed a little off at times, but I got the meaning and emotion behind the words.
    Try not to use so many fillers such as 'I, he, she, the' etc, it can ruin the whole flow.

    Other than that, I liked this.
    I think you did a good job on the whole!

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    Oh young lady we are blinded by love at times even thou the truth is stirring us right in the face. The heart tends to win over the mind no matter how hard we try at times. Just know it is part of growing up. May your heart be filled with peace and joy once again soon.

    sadaddy