Oh young lady we are blinded by love at times even thou the truth is stirring us right in the face. The heart tends to win over the mind no matter how hard we try at times. Just know it is part of growing up. May your heart be filled with peace and joy once again soon.

sadaddy

First off, you need to fix the spelling errors.
It lessens the intensity of the poem and also throws the reader of at times.
I thought the flow seemed a little off at times, but I got the meaning and emotion behind the words.
Try not to use so many fillers such as 'I, he, she, the' etc, it can ruin the whole flow.

Other than that, I liked this.
I think you did a good job on the whole!