Daddy quit

by LittleMissReality   Apr 2, 2004


Daddy you sit there w/ smoking puffing from your mouth
you know everyones has to cough
you put a bad influence on us 3
and you know it you're down to me
I'm the only one and I know it is wrong
Your 2 perfect boys are the smokers
but you're down to me and the day i smoke i will cry
my friend all will help me
so please daddy quit to
and you're not just hurting us you're hurting yourself
think of this are you going to be there to walk w/ me down the isle on my wedding day
or are you gonna have to be in Ur wheel chair with an air tank
u have 10 years to decide so make it quick are you gonna be there by my side
daddy you're hurting my future my life
so please daddy quit today

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aveena

    Yeah i know what your going throu my dad is the same wayy. He's always promising me he's going to stop but it never happens. . Just keep going tell him how you feel, i've seen what happens if you do persuade them into quitting i dont want that to happen to my dad either..

    SORRY about my rambling
    wahat a great poem lots of emotions keep it up Aveena <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Rhiannon

    Wow...thats really emotional and, well it brings me down. My parents dont smoke or drink so i dont know what your going through but reading this makes me think i do!

    excellent and heart-throbbing poem!
    rhiannon

  • 17 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Sad poem to me i hope u showed ur dad this
    goodjob

    ashleigh

  • 17 years ago

    by audrey harris

    Wow. Great poem, Iknow what you're going through. Don't be discouraged, and keep writing! :)

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