Wow. Great poem, Iknow what you're going through. Don't be discouraged, and keep writing! :)

Sad poem to me i hope u showed ur dad this
goodjob

ashleigh

Wow...thats really emotional and, well it brings me down. My parents dont smoke or drink so i dont know what your going through but reading this makes me think i do!

excellent and heart-throbbing poem!
rhiannon

Yeah i know what your going throu my dad is the same wayy. He's always promising me he's going to stop but it never happens. . Just keep going tell him how you feel, i've seen what happens if you do persuade them into quitting i dont want that to happen to my dad either..

SORRY about my rambling
wahat a great poem lots of emotions keep it up Aveena <3