You... +

by + Alana   Jan 30, 2007


You dont know me,
Not anymore,
Hiding away,
Behind the closed door.

You turned your back,
Choosing not to care,
Leaving me alone,
With this pain I cannot bare.

You say you understand,
And know how I feel,
But if you did,
You would help me deal.

You proved me right,
Now I see,
I am worthless,
And you would never miss me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    Great deep poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I love the ending. In my eyes, all the matters it the ending. I think that this one is..very unique. I haven't seen one like this in so long. I think that it's one of the best endings I've seen in a while.

    I think that you're going to be watched by me. I think that your poems are very well. If you ever need a friend to talk to...you can always email me. I'm very well at listening.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Allisha Fox

    Very good. 5/5

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