Cold

by LonelyKnights   Jan 30, 2007


These things we say
The meanings are blurred
The thoughts abstract
These things we say are cold

Lifeless and frozen
They burn through the armor
And freeze our hearts
Killing everything between us

Why does this happen when I think about things
Why does this happen to me
How can we fix these words?
Make them warm

I cant do it on my own
These words are cold
They will never be anything more
Than frozen daggers

Cutting into our souls
Nothing can stop this pain
I can suture these wounds
But nothing can stop the pain

The coldness from our words
Have made their mark on us both
How come this can hurt so much and not kill us
This cold is more than I can take

Please just let me know
How can we stop this pain?
How can we survive this cold?
Please?

.:.Blue_Jay.:.
10:26 29/01/07

This poem is not what I feel its just something that has been on my mind. Im sorry

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  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Beautifuly written, wow!

  • 17 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    "Lifeless and frozen
    They burn through the armor
    And freeze our hearts
    Killing everything between us"
    --My all time favorite verse. Awesome.

    "They will never be anything more
    But frozen daggers"
    --To be picky, I'd say you should change 'but' to 'than'. But, that's to be picky. You do as you wish, love.

    "I can suture these wounds
    But nothing can stop the pain"
    --I LOVE these lines.

    "Please�"
    --Silly p&q screwed your text. : (.

    And, as another Sarah pickyness thing, I'd suggest putting your comments under your signature, because where it is sort of looks like it's supposed to be part of the poem. or maybe even just double space...[you also have the option of paying no mind to my dumb criticism ;)].

    Well now that all of that is said, I just want to remind you that you're a freakin' fantastic writer. People that write like you, I find intriguing. You say you weren't even feeling like this, yet you wrote it as if it were the only thing you could feel. I love it. You're awesome, hun. I love you.

    --SJG.

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