Wow, this is so beautiful.
I loved it.
5/5

Great poem, doing good

Great poem 5/5 keep it up..its very cute

Great poem 5/5 keep it up..its very cute

This is a cute little poem that you've got here. I really like it, the only thing that I can critique on is that if you were to get rid of the words I me and you it would make this poem 10 times better. But other than that I liked it, and the fact that you kept it short and simple made it that much better because you didn't go on and on and repeat yourself like sum people do. Nice work

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)

So sweet....

Thats the way i feel for my man i love this is one really badly

Wow! This is kinda the way I feel about my man! This is a pretty good poem. Not your best work, but it's almost up there. :)

Cute & Simple.
Love is a marvelous thing & it brings huge amounts of joy in our lives.
I really enjoyed reading this one, it's somehow refreshing to hear.

"The way you make me feel
Is just to hard to describe
When you're around me
I get this funny vibe."

^ My favorite stanza. So easy for me to relate too. =]

Your flow was great & your choice of wording was good too. Wonderful piece you have written, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn

I luv dis 1! soo sweet! keep it up:)

Nice job on your poem. I really liked thelast stanza. Good job!

Awwe beautiful poem 5/5

Beautiful poem! love the way it flows and the the emotion behind the words, i am going to read it to my girlfriend, thanx.

' Crabs and Crumpets '

awe i really like this one .... i am hoping that you will add more too it some time tho .. if you ever do tell me please ...

This is such a sweet poem... and i love all the rhymes that u used. i love your poem.

That is so cute!! Thats exactly how i felt bout my ex..but sadly he did leave and my heart did break in two. I hope your doesnt. Mwahz--keep up the awesome work