by Mike G
Very well written poem. You did a a beutiful job of describing the anguish that comes along with hoping for a love that is not there. Keep up the good work. |
by Connie
Wow ~ very well written. |
Dreams can be many different things but always some how feel so real. Dreams are sometimes better then reality and at times also much worse. I loved the meaning in the poem it was great - people come and go in our lives everyday, but theres always a couple we want to stick around. great write 5/5 |