Comments : Fire of Phoenix

  • 17 years ago

    by bc

    Aww. i love your poem, 5/5 good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Never URs

    This poems great... good job,
    you have alot of talent! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Alvaro

    This poem makes me wonder in so many ways, is it possible anyone can write like this.. not to many ppl make me think i usually make ppl think well ppl around me.. friends, school. and i really never got the chance to think about something so deep and u made me do it i love this poem the words in it mean more then what it seems great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Never URs

    I love this poem! great flow! plz comment on mine :)

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this is a truely spectacular poem.. the flow is perfect as well as the rhyme.. the word choice was imecable.. wondeful write..

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Beautiful imagery. i liked the rhyming, i'm really no good at it.

    These angels of fire rule the Earth, yet their beauty can't be tamed.

    does that need to be there, the word yet?

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Another short yet perfect poem. wouldn't want it any other way. the words you use are so unique. gee. i love it. excellent! 5

    david

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    This is a short but great read. The only thing I dislike about it is the last two lines. They don't have a great flow like the rest of the poem. Good job though!