by bc
Aww. i love your poem, 5/5 good job |
by Never URs
This poems great... good job, |
by Alvaro
This poem makes me wonder in so many ways, is it possible anyone can write like this.. not to many ppl make me think i usually make ppl think well ppl around me.. friends, school. and i really never got the chance to think about something so deep and u made me do it i love this poem the words in it mean more then what it seems great job 5/5 |
by Never URs
I love this poem! great flow! plz comment on mine :) |
Wow.. this is a truely spectacular poem.. the flow is perfect as well as the rhyme.. the word choice was imecable.. wondeful write.. |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Beautiful imagery. i liked the rhyming, i'm really no good at it. |
by David
Another short yet perfect poem. wouldn't want it any other way. the words you use are so unique. gee. i love it. excellent! 5 |
This is a short but great read. The only thing I dislike about it is the last two lines. They don't have a great flow like the rest of the poem. Good job though! |