Cute poem.. um.. i just wanted to let you know you won 1st place in me and my friends joint contest for your poem color in the grey so if you could please go there and post which poems you would like us to comment as your award

''Dreams come true, just to break.
just like the love thats seriously fake''

I loved these lines, it was such a perfect ending to such a beautiful poem.
I thought the imagery was fantastic, and the whole piece flowed perfectly.

All is not what it seems i think...and often people dont realize what they do themselves...not sure if that is relevant to this poem...but it is what was on my mind

-Jason-