Ashamed, afraid, alone

by steve   Jan 30, 2007


My days the same the night no better,
it seems I'm drowning and its only getting wetter,
no patience to save no tolerance to stand,
shot around like a rubber band,
so many loves so many lost,
whys this life have such a cost,
the pain of not one, not two, but three,
all the memories I still wish to see,
so I sit in this bar and watch it unfold,
so many couples with each other to hold,
working all day yet still no money,
my bills so high its almost funny,
electric, gas, and water too,
cant pay the phone bill, can this be true,
will there ever be a day when every things right,
I can lay my head down for one worry less night

sorry this poem ain't my best I just needed to vent

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  • 16 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    Ah, this is sad, but cheer up! things will look up i'm sure :) right when i'm at my lowest point, they always do

  • 16 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Tnx for the comments in my poems..you too have a wonderful work..tc and god bless...

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy Wells

    I thought this was brilliant babes, writing about everyday worries it's nice to know someone else feel like that too well done keep on writing you have talent :) xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Love is a Beautiful Thing

    I think really good yoo were just expressing your self 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicja B

    Well if this poem isn't your best, then i'll need to read some more because this was pretty great. 5/5