You left me dying

by thirstyvampiregirl   Jan 31, 2007


I hear your footsteps walk away
as i lie on the floor in pain.
you walk out the door,
and let my tears pour.

I lie on the floor crying,
then I scream "don't go",
but you walk out the door and leave me dying.

You broke my heart and riped my soul, but this time i won't win the gold.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cheyenne

    Good. You might want to change the last bit a little and add somthing on but it's very good. I like it:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Tht was short but realy nicely done.

  • 17 years ago

    by darkangelcrying

    Horrible thing to happen but wornderfully done. what has happened in your past my little girl...

  • 17 years ago

    by jason

    Its short but i liek it

  • 17 years ago

    by jason

    Its short but i like it = ]

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