by missy Jan 31, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I watch your eyes |
by heather
Great job. straight to the point. simplicity is a great technique. sweet job. ;) |
by Danielle
Very elegantly written, the flow is perfect, when you wake up from the dream it stops aburptly, just as in real life when you realize its not really there. |
Usually I don't like these love poems...But I loved this one..It made me feel like I was the one that was feeling it....Keep it up....5.0 From Me.... |
Aww. That was sweet. |