Aww. That was sweet.
Good job.

Usually I don't like these love poems...But I loved this one..It made me feel like I was the one that was feeling it....Keep it up....5.0 From Me....

Very elegantly written, the flow is perfect, when you wake up from the dream it stops aburptly, just as in real life when you realize its not really there.
-danielle

Great job. straight to the point. simplicity is a great technique. sweet job. ;)