This was a very nice poem. The vocabulary was amazing throughout as was the flow of it all. The emotion, depth, and heart were well written and all around, it was the best I have read from you. Though, that doesn't say much, it's the only one I have read from you. Good work. 4.6/5

Great contrast and imagery! I enjoyed this piece alot

Hehe, this was an honest read and you have put it beautifully. Plus the title is amazing!